Die Mart Die@sh.itjust.works to memes@lemmy.world · 1 year agoWho?sh.itjust.worksimagemessage-square10fedilinkarrow-up1405arrow-down116
arrow-up1389arrow-down1imageWho?sh.itjust.worksDie Mart Die@sh.itjust.works to memes@lemmy.world · 1 year agomessage-square10fedilink
minus-squareslaneesh_is_right@lemmy.orglinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up18arrow-down1·1 year agoIt’s because they tried really hard to make a bad joke work.
minus-squareqarbone@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up2·edit-21 year agoThe bones are good but the set up is lacking. It needs to be couple’s therapy, so the wife is in the room. And, while I like the image of him crying but still going to say it, it doesn’t fit with the new setup, so you’d have to change him to being unable to help himself. For brevity, maybe just change the last line to: my wife: …I swear to God, Jon. Don’t.
It’s because they tried really hard to make a bad joke work.
The bones are good but the set up is lacking.
It needs to be couple’s therapy, so the wife is in the room. And, while I like the image of him crying but still going to say it, it doesn’t fit with the new setup, so you’d have to change him to being unable to help himself.
For brevity, maybe just change the last line to: